Work Log:
Monday: Self-Reflection of Film
Tuesday: Self-Reflection of Film
Wednesday: Self-Critique of Film
Thursday: Self-Critique of Film
Friday: Self-Critique of Film
Short Film Reflection
Recently, I made a short film that I titled "Divorce." It was a story that I had thought of a couple weeks before production and wanted to use as my college film supplemental portfolio submission. After a month and a half of production, I finished it. There was a lot I wanted to say about my experience and the final product, so here's my thoughts on it:
In terms of a Self-Reflection on what I've made, I'd say I'm not as satisfied as I had hoped to be when all was said and done. I think it's hard to say if the final product is good or not because a lot didn't go how I originally planned and as the creator of the film who spent over 20-30 hours total making it, I've spent a lot of time focusing on the imperfections of my film rather than what makes it good - there is bias in my opinions here then. I think what I really don't like about my film goes a lot about how I planned and executed it. That isn't to say that it was horribly planned and horribly executed, but just rather that I could have and should have done better. This was my first time picking back up a DSLR camera after about 9 months, my first time using audio equipment, and my first time writing a full on story that required planning around the schedules of multiple people. Because of that, there were some difficulties. I should have better formatted my storyboard because I ended up being inefficient with how long it took to set up scenes, I should have had scripts printed out for the actors to follow so that transitioning between shots would have been easier, and I should have planned an extra day to film for retakes. Along with that, the video quality in some shots were bad and it was too late by the time I noticed it. Not to mention, when I ended up filming a scene outside during a weekend when we had limited time to film, the batteries to both my zoom recorder and my camera both died and broke, so I had to end up holding my phone awkwardly for side angles (that the phone automatically color corrected poor during the recording multiple times) and use another phone for audio.
I did however learn a lot from my experience filming this. I know now to plan better ahead of time on all accounts, how to set up quicker, and general experience using film equipment again. I think the majority of what I learned in this film was editing experience. I learned several techniques that I did not previously know to get certain shots the way I wanted them with moving assets that cut off or that stay bound to certain areas, etc. etc. As I rewatch the film I can see the difference in quality of what I edited when I started the post-production process versus later on in my process.
For my Self-Critique, here is a list of things I would like to mention about what I think I did good and bad:
- I think starting with an opener that introduces that topic is good, the music is good with it, and the transition is alright into the actual story
- The lighting for the first couple shots is poor
- I like the cut to black and audio with Ward talking for the first time
- The first shot Ward is actually in feels kind of weird and poorly paced
- I think a lot of the first scene before the montage is poorly paced
- Ward's transition from drawing to person feels too fast and once again poorly paced
- Dolly can be heard in the dolly shot
- All of the drawings are pretty good (though I didn't make them)
- Some drawings are very well edited in and cropped and others aren't and sometimes don't even attach correctly to the sticky note paper behind it
- Unfocused in one of the shots in the classroom during the montage
- I think the transition into the house and cut to black after seeing Nick is probably the best sequence in the film
- Shaky camera during the car scene (which is because I had to hold the camera as a phone with my arm extended from behind the seat because the camera was broken and we didn't have time to do it a different time)
- I think that the monologue from Ward is well spoken, but kind of comes out of nowhere
- The car coming in as a non-descript object kind of looks silly, and the car crash happening itself can be seen as kind of stupid too
- I don't know if I went too far with the blue color tint during the sad montage
- The foot of the drawing in the first part of the sad montage is poorly cropped
- The music in the sad montage is a good part of the atmosphere
- The transition from black to Thomas with the piano is good
- Camera movement from Thomas talking to the student for the first time is good
- Audio quality is pretty good throughout I think (except for maybe Ward's in the first scene)
- The last shot with Thomas learning to be happy again is too quickly brought on along with credits that end too quickly I think (both had to be edited that way because the final shot was recorded with too quick a zoom out and the song ends too quickly as well for longer credits)
